My Poetry – Sand Castle
I’m going to try and make a habit of posting up some of my own poetry sporadically within this blog, to help fill the void between book reviews. This poem “Sand Castle” I think is fairly self explanatory. Hope you enjoy.
by Stephen Recker
and suntan lotion
sting my eyes as I look out at
the somber, constant pulse
reaching out to dissolve
my sand castle.
Half the base is gone,
barely holding up the teetering tower.
I want to save it,
but before I can move
Dad picks me up,
carries me out,
and puts me
into the water.
I have to jump to stay above the waves,
glimpsing the tower as it reflects
the greens and browns of the sea glass
windows as the sun
I struggle closer to shore and see,
in a moment, what remains of the tower,
a grim husk,
before I’m slapped down.
My head smacks the sand, my ears ring,
I swallow the brine, choke, and vomit.
When I look up,
the castle is gone.
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The sentence structure resembles castle towers from a landscape view. Intended?
The short answer is not consciously.
I think that’s one of the fun parts about art/literature/design: the unexpected results that can only add to the work. Keep it up.
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